Tuesday, September 25, 2007

VJ Day Kiss

The sweetness of victory
Only grew in his sweet kiss,
Hist strong arms
Gently holding me to him,
Passerbys watch us
As we embrace each other,
With only letters sent
Back and forth,
It feels amazing to
Be in his arms,
His return alive
Brought me happiness,
The kiss seems to
Last forever,
As we stand there
The world spins,
Bringing loved ones
Home at last.
~Elle

2 comments:

.//blog said...

1)...
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ooookkkeeeyyy....
2)the last 5
3)ummmmmm
4)do a different one

Bethany Joy said...

1) good, about reuniting.
2) last four lines
3) i dont really think you need to change anything, just proof read it, you have one little typo that i noticed, there might be another.
4) the other one